long week, but i got the e-mail about making taking a look at this and making it a little more evilish... and after long hours of study, i think the main issue is clear, we got a little pokemon stuck in our silent hill.

annnnnyway, id rather save time and just move this sketch foward, so here are some of the real issues and bla bla...
wings a little to small,body way to big - so we make like hallow bone, lookes creepier anyway...
insects have mandibles, bone fish have jaws like that "again, why i do aquatic refrences, all yo monsters look like fish" - so we swap it out.
the eyes need to be more for a flight insect like a wasp or moth not a spider- so we swap that out.
no stinger, nothing this big needs poison, it would hunt more like a real like african owl eagle. They eat monkey, your thing eats people... and it works for the game, swoop in and headbut your prey at 80mph crushing its skull and kiling it.

we can make even it more horrific, but that involves breaking the rules...